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Aug. 9th, 2004 09:05 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
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Send me something! You know you want to.
The Main is still accepting submissions for its initial issue. The deadline has been extended to October 1, with the issue due out in the winter. Poetry only, limit of 25 lines. All styles accepted.
If you don't want to submit to The Main, that's okay. I have Zen cards I can send back to you as a pen-pal thing. :) Or even some nice floral stationery.
Ypsilanti, MI 48198
Send me something! You know you want to.
The Main is still accepting submissions for its initial issue. The deadline has been extended to October 1, with the issue due out in the winter. Poetry only, limit of 25 lines. All styles accepted.
If you don't want to submit to The Main, that's okay. I have Zen cards I can send back to you as a pen-pal thing. :) Or even some nice floral stationery.
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Date: 2004-08-09 08:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-08-10 05:17 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-08-09 10:12 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-08-10 05:20 am (UTC)My initial response to your poem, though, is that this line in particular
As the galvanic twitch of prior conditioning destroys
is too much like prose. Even free verse needs some semblance of rhythm to be considered verse.