I'm one of those people who needs to see a poem on the page. I don't read literary websites because there's a difference in reading online and reading from a book or piece of paper. So I'm not accepting submissions here or at my email address.
My initial response to your poem, though, is that this line in particular
As the galvanic twitch of prior conditioning destroys
is too much like prose. Even free verse needs some semblance of rhythm to be considered verse.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2004-08-10 05:20 am (UTC)My initial response to your poem, though, is that this line in particular
As the galvanic twitch of prior conditioning destroys
is too much like prose. Even free verse needs some semblance of rhythm to be considered verse.