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I came across this in The New Young American Poets anthology, published in 2000. It's by Erin Belieu (I will need to get works of hers).


Legend of the Albino Farm

Omaha, Nebraska

They do not sleep nights
but stand between

rows of glowing corn and
cabbages grown on acres past

the edge of the city.
Surrendered flags,

their nightgowns furl and
unfurl around their legs.

Only women could be this
white. Like mules,

they are sterile,
and it appears that

their mouths are always
open. Because they are thin

as weeds, the albinos
look hungry. If you drive out

to the farm, tree branches will
point the way. No map will show

where, no phone is listed.
It will seem that the moon, plump

above their shoulders, is constant,
orange as harvest all year

long. We say, when a mother
gives birth to an albino girl,

she feigns sleep after
labor while an Asian

man steals in, spirits
the pale baby away.

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Date: 2003-01-01 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittenkissies.livejournal.com
What does this mean to you?

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Date: 2003-01-01 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] novapsyche.livejournal.com
The interplay of its language is an inspiration. It reminds me of the process of learning how to write [that is, seriously crafting poetry].

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Date: 2003-01-01 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittenkissies.livejournal.com
I think it is warm and wonderful until the last couple of lines when it devolves into a prime time tv hurry up and finish the fucker ending. Big on WB and Fox...

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Date: 2003-01-01 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] novapsyche.livejournal.com
I don't think the ending is that bad. It just took a tangential turn. As lines go, I like the last two a lot.

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Date: 2003-01-02 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittenkissies.livejournal.com
Maybe by themselves. But they still sound like some form of racial prejudice.

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Date: 2003-01-02 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittenkissies.livejournal.com
Maybe by themselves. But they still sound like some form of racial prejudice.
Ignore the repeat of the first line.
I look for irony or surprise to be even ever so slightly germane. This sounds generic and desperate, like she could have ended as well with "Then the space aliens shoved probes up their butts and whisked them off to their planet for experiments."

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