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[novapsyche]

I fly apart at large distances;
I force matter into space.
I am the son of a photon:
I light upon the shadow and fix there.

I am restlessness in motion,
I am mistaken weight.
I'm dew as time evaporates.

6/1/04

Comments

[sweetsongstress.livejournal.com]

I've only seen one other of your poems recently (a rhyming one, that someone in poetryslamming said sounded like rap), but it sounds like you're incorporating science more into your stuff. That's COOL.
I really like it when someone can take on the subject of science with a meditative or spiritual tone, because I think in some respects, science is sacred knowledge.

I also like the rhymes. Good work, hope you're not mad cuz you have yet another person talking about your poetry. I enjoy reading your work.

[novapsyche.livejournal.com]

I haven't been writing much, and I tend to shop my poems around to other communities before they make an appearance in poetryslamming (though this is not always the case).

Thanks for the feedback. How could I complain about someone having something to say about my writing? :)

Oh, and I've been trying to write about science for a little over a year now. This poem, while not really about science, uses some of the same tone and terminology. It's fun, lifting language from different places.