Actually, they're all great, but where's the Pinata poem, the wedding day and the urine-soaked aunt. Come to think of it, where's the anorexia poem? Have you got a collection? Would you mind if I stitched one together myself?
I didn't think the pinata poem was strong enough for a grad school application, but I'm willing to give it a look. I haven't given the stuff I've written in the last six months a thorough review.
Feel free to make suggestions. Just keep in mind that I have a deadline(!), so the more expedient the feedback, the better. :)
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Date: 2003-12-16 06:48 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2003-12-16 08:56 am (UTC)Feel free to make suggestions. Just keep in mind that I have a deadline(!), so the more expedient the feedback, the better. :)