Dear Ms. Chumley,
I recently came across your article regarding a woman in Ohio whose car was swallowed by a sinkhole. Your opening sentence reads, "A woman whose car was swallowed by a sinkhole in Toledo said she kept calling on Jesus to save her — and he did." Dismayed, I kept reading to see if you were setting up a pun where one of the firefighters who saved her was named Jesus. This does not seem to be the case.
As a reporter, you have a duty to be as objective as you can (unless, of course, you are writing an opinion piece, which in this instance you were not). You may view your lead sentence as eyecatching, but I as a reader view it as heavy-handed. I understand you work for the Washington Times, but surely you realize that not only Christians read your newspaper. Surely you know that the United States is a patchwork quilt of different beliefs.
I am astounded that a newspaper of any repute would advance the notion not only that a particular deity exists but that he or she personally intervened in an happenstance. What you have baldly asserted is that Jesus performed a miracle in Toledo. I would like to see your sources as to that.
Sincerely,
I recently came across your article regarding a woman in Ohio whose car was swallowed by a sinkhole. Your opening sentence reads, "A woman whose car was swallowed by a sinkhole in Toledo said she kept calling on Jesus to save her — and he did." Dismayed, I kept reading to see if you were setting up a pun where one of the firefighters who saved her was named Jesus. This does not seem to be the case.
As a reporter, you have a duty to be as objective as you can (unless, of course, you are writing an opinion piece, which in this instance you were not). You may view your lead sentence as eyecatching, but I as a reader view it as heavy-handed. I understand you work for the Washington Times, but surely you realize that not only Christians read your newspaper. Surely you know that the United States is a patchwork quilt of different beliefs.
I am astounded that a newspaper of any repute would advance the notion not only that a particular deity exists but that he or she personally intervened in an happenstance. What you have baldly asserted is that Jesus performed a miracle in Toledo. I would like to see your sources as to that.
Sincerely,