novapsyche | (no subject)

I've added to the untitled piece I posted a few days ago. However, I'm not sure if it's helped or not. Also, it still lacks a title. And I have a poetry group tonight. I suspect I'll embarrass myself, but I'll bring it nonetheless.

I extended the third part, but the underlying metaphor is lost now. People are bound to say the piece confuses them, and I won't have any defense.